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| 제목 | This time I wrote about SHINEE. | 등록일 | 2023-12-09 |
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| 내용 | I saw a performance video of Shinee in 'MAMA Awards' and I had goosebumps. I like their songs and performance, but I felt something new in this stage. Actually, I have thought Shinee's identity is 'Jonghyun'. Because his vocal is very charming and I have felt he's the center of the group. But my thought like this was disappeared since this performance. I felt each member was essence of the Shinee. One of them, I was impressed the most that 'Taemin' was the center of the group. The image was stable and I was filled with emotion somehow. I was sure they're one and only idol group inrreplaceable. | ||
| 담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2023-12-12 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Hello~ Some of my younger cousins and my husband's nieces like Shinee. ^^ They even attended a concert before of Shinee even though their concert was very expensive.~ kkk~ I agree, with their numerous fans, no doubt, this idol group is irreplaceable.~ ^^
**Correction: I had goosebumps when I saw Shinee's 'MAMA Awards' performance video. I enjoy their songs and performances, but this time I felt something different. Actually, I believed Shinee's name was 'Jonghyun'. Because his voice is so appealing, and I feel he is the focal point of the ensemble. But that thought has vanished since this performance. I felt like each member embodied the Shinee. I was particularly fascinated by the fact that 'Taemin' was the focal point of the group. The image was stable, and I was overcome with emotion. I was convinced they were the one and only irreplaceable idol group. |
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