Check your bus card balance before you take the bus.

--> Good sentence!~ ^^ 

This battery have to top up for use.

--> This battery must be charged before use.

I can assemble easely following instruction of manual.

--> I can easily construct it by following the instructions in the manual.

The screen is so dark so I can see nothing.

--> The screen is so dark so I can't see anything. 

This school proivdes every student school uniform.

--> This school provides school uniform for every student. 

Don't forget to accept change.

--> Good sentence!~ ^^ 

The public transfortation fare is raising constantly.

--> The public transportation fare is always rising. 

Just one typo lead a big problem in business.

--> A single misspelling can cause a major commercial problem.

As the area was gentrified, real estate is higher.

--> Real estate prices have risen as the region has become gentrified.

There isn't regulation yet because the city develop rapidly.

--> There isn't regulation yet because the city developed rapidly.

There are many people and price is expensive at the touristy places.

--> There are a lot of people, and the prices are high in tourist areas.

His atelier is filled of a lot of canvas.

--> His atelier is filled with a lot of canvas.