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제목 | I made sentences about last class. | 등록일 | 2023-12-23 |
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내용 | I definitely heard that she cursed me at the cafeteria. He is always jealous when his girlfriend hang out with her friends. She got a bonus as a reward about long servies. He forgot to buy souvenir for his family. Is this the right gate of outbound flight to Korea? I heard there are lots of pickpockets in Europe. They dreamed of robbing a bank and to be a rich. Did you really invest this company two grand? I paid for bill every time so I have a lot of changes. Check your change whenever you pay. I forgot cashing my traveler's checks. Using envelope when you give money to someone is manner. |
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담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2023-12-27 |
첨삭 내용 | I definitely heard that she cursed me at the cafeteria. Better say: I definitely heard that she cursed me in the cafeteria.
Better say: He is always jealous when his girlfriend hangs out with her friends.
Better say: She received a bonus as a reward of her long service to the company.
Better say: He forgot to buy souvenirs for his family. (*Use plural form of the noun "souvenir".)
Better say: Is this the correct outbound flight gate for Korea?
**Good and correct sentence!~ ^^
Better say: They dreamed of robbing a bank to be a rich.
Better say: Did you really invest two grand in this company?
Better say: I paid my bills on time every time, therefore I have a lot of changes.
****Good and correct sentence!~ ^^
Better say: I had forgotten to cash my traveler's checks.
Better say: It is polite to give someone money in an envelope. |