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| 제목 | the end of the year with my father. | 등록일 | 2023-12-29 |
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| 내용 | Since it is the end of the year, my father came to Seoul from my hometown two days ago. I ate delicious beef, wine, and whiskey with my father, and went hiking and hot spring the next day. It was nice that my girlfriend and father spent time together. I want to continue being filial to my father. |
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| 담당강사 | Heni1 | 등록일 | 2023-12-29 |
| 첨삭 내용 |
The End Of The Year With My Father Since it is the end of the year, my father came to Seoul from my hometown two days ago. I ate delicious beef, wine, and whiskey with my father.We went hiking AND THEN WE WENT TO THE hot spring the next day. |
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