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제목 | I made sentences with new words. | 등록일 | 2023-12-30 |
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내용 | Water can be both liquid and solid. Every electric devices can't go through the metal detector. Kid's toothpastes usually sweet and tasty. Every student in this lecture has their laptop. It'll never leak if you put it in a Ziploc. I like the pants with deep pockets. All passengers must have there own boarding pass. If you don't like your gift, I can switch with mine. There is no application more convenient than this application. He had smoking time for working frequently. I have to find any lavatory right now. You can't bring cigarettes in the cabin. |
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담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2024-01-04 |
첨삭 내용 | Water can be both liquid and solid. -> Good and correct sentence!~ ^^
Better say: Electric devices cannot pass through the metal detector.
Better say: Children's toothpastes are typically sweet and tasty.
Better say: Every student in this class has a laptop.
**Good and correct sentence!~ ^^
Better say: I like pants with deep pockets. (*Me too!~ It's so functional. ^^ )
Better say: All passengers must have their own boarding pass. (You should use pronoun "their". )
Better say: If you don't like your gift, I can exchange it for mine.
**Good and correct sentence!~ ^^
Better say: He smoked frequently while working.
Better say: I have to find a lavatory right now.
**Good and correct sentence!~ ^^ |