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제목 I made sentences with new words. 등록일 2024-01-13
내용 He has never missed first so far.
There were lots of employees in cafeteria, and we had to have a lunch going out.
The main reason we failed is a wrong promotion.
You have to understand more personality variety.
This hotel offered shuttle bus in last year.
I think our lunch time is short.
The CEO is in store for expanding the business next year.
I'm sure that you are in for a treat this movie.
After of all, you must learn the ropes.
담당강사 Lynda 등록일 2024-01-18
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He has never missed first so far. (*Correct sentence~ ^^) 


There were lots of employees in cafeteria, and we had to have a lunch going out.

Better say: There were many employees in the cafeteria, and we needed to eat lunch before heading away.


The main reason we failed is a wrong promotion. (*Correct sentence~ ^^) 


You have to understand more personality variety.

Better say: You have to understand a wider range of personality traits.


This hotel offered shuttle bus in last year.

Better say: This hotel provided a shuttle service last year.


I think our lunch time is short.  (*Correct sentence~ ^^) 


The CEO is in store for expanding the business next year.

Better say: The CEO plans to develop the business next year.


I'm sure that you are in for a treat this movie. 

Better say: I'm confident that you'll enjoy this film.


After of all, you must learn the ropes. (*Correct sentence~ ^^) 

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