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제목 | I made sentences with new words. | 등록일 | 2024-01-13 |
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내용 | He has never missed first so far. There were lots of employees in cafeteria, and we had to have a lunch going out. The main reason we failed is a wrong promotion. You have to understand more personality variety. This hotel offered shuttle bus in last year. I think our lunch time is short. The CEO is in store for expanding the business next year. I'm sure that you are in for a treat this movie. After of all, you must learn the ropes. |
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담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2024-01-18 |
첨삭 내용 | He has never missed first so far. (*Correct sentence~ ^^)
Better say: There were many employees in the cafeteria, and we needed to eat lunch before heading away.
Better say: You have to understand a wider range of personality traits.
Better say: This hotel provided a shuttle service last year.
Better say: The CEO plans to develop the business next year.
Better say: I'm confident that you'll enjoy this film.
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