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제목 Lesson3,Questions(Thank you for reviewing my sentences, Lucky! Have a great weekend) 등록일 2024-01-13
내용 1.Of course, Korea is one of a country which can subscribe Netflix service.
2. Actually i rarely watch TV in my days.
If i have a spare time after leaving my office, i usually read or study my major in my room for helping my work.
3. In Korea, there are many different types of video-streaming services companies except 'Netflix'
we called that kinds of companies like OTT services companies.
4. Yes. I normally prefer watch TV show on laptop & phone. because i can see the shows which i want regardless of time and place.
담당강사 Neal2 등록일 2024-01-14
첨삭 내용

1.Of course, Korea is one of a country which can subscribe Netflix service. OF COURSE, KOREAN RESIDENTS ARE ABLE TO SUBSCRIBE TO TNEFLIX SERVICE.
2. Actually i rarely watch TV in my days.  DO YOU MEAN THAT YOU RARELY WATCH TY DURING THE DAYTIME?
If i have a spare time after leaving my office, i usually read or study my major in my room for helping my work.  NOT 'A' SPARE TIME, JUST SPARE TIME     TO HELP ME TO HELP ME WITH MY WORK.
3. In Korea, there are many different types of video-streaming services companies except 'Netflix'
we called that kinds of companies like OTT services companies.  OTHER IN ADDITION TO NETFLIX   WE CALL THAT KIND OF COMPANY OTT SERVICES COMPANIES.
4. Yes. I normally prefer watch TV show on laptop & phone. because i can see the shows which i want regardless of time and place.  PREFER TO WATCH TV SHOWS        THE SHOWS THAT I WANT, 

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