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제목	diabetic	등록일	2024-01-23
내용	My mom has diabetic for 30 years. so she had many complication. from last summer she really was sick. so, I took care of her. we usually go to hospital twice a month her eyesight is bad so recently she did cataract surgery. And she was not good kindney, more and more she lose weight. I look after her everyday for while she stay in my home. I check blood sugar, and is careful of eating something. and I help her to work out like walking, getting stairs My apartment is 27 floor. Theseday, it is very cold. so we are going to get stairs I’m tying to everything she is better than last su
담당강사	Brandiss1	등록일	2024-01-24
첨삭 내용	My mom has been a diabetic for 30 years. She has had many complications. Last summer, she was really sick so I took care of her. We usually go to the hospital twice a month. Her eyesight is bad so recently she had cataract surgery. She does not have good kidneys so she is losing more and more weight. I look after her everyday while she is staying in my home. I check her blood sugar and carefully watch her eating habits. I help her with different types of work outs like walking and going up the stairs. My apartment is on the 27th floor. These days, it is very cold so we are going up the stairs. I’m trying to do everything to help her get better than she was last summer.