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제목	Relieve Stress(Stock Chart)	등록일	2024-02-15
내용	After exercise, I study stock chart. I think that the reason about stress is to make more money. So easily to make money is to relieve stress. I started to study stock chart about 8 years ago. I thought there is a sign on the chart about stock price is rising point. Unfortunately, I haven't found a sign yet. korea has no income tax on the stock unlike America. I want to make money as soon as possible. Then I will quit my job and have other hobbies, like a golf. I try to make money about unearned income.
담당강사	Neal2	등록일	2024-02-15
첨삭 내용	After exercise, I study stock chart. I think that the reason about stress is to make more money. So easily to make money is to relieve stress. I started to study stock chart about 8 years ago. I thought there is a sign on the chart about stock price is rising point. Unfortunately, I haven't found a sign yet. korea has no income tax on the stock unlike America. I want to make money as soon as possible. Then I will quit my job and have other hobbies, like a golf. I try to make money about unearned income. I WILL DISCUSS CHANGES DURING CLASS. THANK YOU YUNMAN!