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| 제목 | I met my high school friends in a long time. | 등록일 | 2024-03-17 |
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| 내용 | I met my high school friends this Saterday. Some of them met three month ago, but one of them met 4 years ago. It was a very special and we prepared a surprise birthday party for one. My friends and I were quite nervous because it has been a long time since we had a surprise party. But it perfectly succeeded. She was really happy, so she paid cafe for us. In the cafe, she gushed out a coffee after saw our photoes and the table turned into a sea of laughter. After we went to the board game cafe, I laughed and shouted a lot. As a result, my voice is hoarse on Sunday. | ||
| 담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2024-03-21 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Hello!~ Wow~ that was such a wonderful time.~ ^^ Hope you will have more of that fun time together with your friends.~ ^^
**CORRECTION: I met my high school friends this Saterday. --> I met my high school friends on Saturday. Some of them met three month ago, but one of them met 4 years ago. --> I met some of them three months ago, but I met one of them four years ago. She was really happy, so she paid cafe for us. --> She was so thrilled that she paid for us at the cafe. As a result, my voice is hoarse on Sunday. --> As a result, my voice became hoarse on Sunday. |
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