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제목 | Making sentences~ | 등록일 | 2024-03-23 |
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내용 | What's your the most memorable moment? I prepared five clothes sets, but she selected only one set. All kids run around everywhere. I need to find any pavilion to sit my family. The president hosted this workshop, but he didn't participate. She made me an unforgettable memory at the amusement park. Don't worry a lot. I will work out. My team member haven't ever been participating in team-building activity. I want to do something to develope my community. He considers to bond between parents and children. That's a good cause to paly games. |
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담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2024-03-26 |
첨삭 내용 | What's your the most memorable moment? Better say: What's your most memorable moment? (*remove "the" )
Better say: I prepared five sets of clothes, but she selected only one.
Better say: I need to find any pavilion to sit with my family.
Better say: She gave me an unforgettable experience at the amusement park.
Better say: My team members have never participated in a team-building activity.
Better say: I want to do something to help my neighborhood.
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