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제목 Regarding the topic this morning (1) 등록일 2024-04-11
내용 1. The government should allow the individual's right to die.
All humans desire a comfortable death. While a person could not choose to begin life, I believe ending it is a personal choice and that individuals have the right to die comfortably. The religion and country should not compel matters of life and death. Forcing individuals to endure a hopeless and difficult life is just as unethical as a baby farm.
담당강사 ThomasH1usa 등록일 2024-04-12
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1. The government should allow the individual's right to die.
All humans desire a comfortable death. While a person does not choose to begin life, I believe ending it is a personal choice and that individuals have the right to die comfortably. Neither religion nor government should intervene in matters of voluntary life and death. The act of compelling individuals to endure a hopeless and difficult life is just as unethical as a baby farm.

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