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제목 | Daily diary (2024.04.16) | 등록일 | 2024-04-16 |
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내용 | Hi! First time, I told you I want to write English well. You recommended short sentence is good for me. So, I think daily diary is good for me. But I don't have a time because I made a presentation in company at last friday. After that day, I have a time to write it. First page, I want to introduce my routine. I get up at 7:40 A.M. Before going to work, I buy ice Americano coffee at Composed coffee. I drink it all before lunch, and I buy new coffee ice Americano. After buying it, I have a chinese lesson at company. My colleages have a lesson about 10 people. I don't have a byte. see you.. |
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담당강사 | Gladys | 등록일 | 2024-04-17 |
첨삭 내용 | Hi! First time, I told you I want to write English well. You recommended short sentence is good for me.
Hi! The first time we spoke, I mentioned that I want to improve my English writing. You recommended using short sentences, which I think is a good idea for me.
Hello, Hocheol! I hope you find this helpful. Keep it up!^^ |