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제목 Making sentences! 등록일 2024-04-21
내용 Everyone respects her because she is the most competent employee in our company.
I believe your boss is upset, so you had better to go later.
Can you maintain this condition by this Friday?
As the president said, you're going to pay a visit to another country to negotiate.
Believe in yourself. You will do a good job.
I want to pay a visit someone of your company to my office.
What did you do your girlfriend and why she was upset?
I always want to do a good job every side.
I have to negotiate to clients next week.
담당강사 Lynda 등록일 2024-04-23
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Everyone respects her because she is the most competent employee in our company. --**Correct sentence~ ^^ 


I believe your boss is upset, so you had better to go later.

Better say: I believe your boss is upset, so you better go later. 


Can you maintain this condition by this Friday? 

Better say: Can you maintain this condition until Friday?


As the president said, you're going to pay a visit to another country to negotiate.--**Correct sentence~ ^^ 


Believe in yourself. You will do a good job. --**Correct sentence~ ^^ 

 

I want to pay a visit someone of your company to my office.

Better say: I want to someone from your company to pay a visit in my office. 


What did you do your girlfriend and why she was upset?

Better say: What did you do to your girlfriend that made her upset?


I always want to do a good job every side. 

Better say: I always want to do a good job every now and then. 


I have to negotiate to clients next week. --**Correct sentence~ ^^ 

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