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제목 | Making sentences! | 등록일 | 2024-04-21 |
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내용 | Everyone respects her because she is the most competent employee in our company. I believe your boss is upset, so you had better to go later. Can you maintain this condition by this Friday? As the president said, you're going to pay a visit to another country to negotiate. Believe in yourself. You will do a good job. I want to pay a visit someone of your company to my office. What did you do your girlfriend and why she was upset? I always want to do a good job every side. I have to negotiate to clients next week. |
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담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2024-04-23 |
첨삭 내용 | Everyone respects her because she is the most competent employee in our company. --**Correct sentence~ ^^
Better say: I believe your boss is upset, so you better go later.
Better say: Can you maintain this condition until Friday?
I want to pay a visit someone of your company to my office. Better say: I want to someone from your company to pay a visit in my office.
Better say: What did you do to your girlfriend that made her upset?
Better say: I always want to do a good job every now and then.
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