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제목 | Making sentences~! | 등록일 | 2024-04-26 |
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내용 | I will send you a fax with further details. It might be better you live in lodging at first before you make a contract a main house in overseas. Think about it's like a test choosing a correct words. Our department has a daily meeting after the company was founded. Are there any available laptops you can borrow? You should let me know a passwords and I can connect to your Wi-Fi. I haven't seen this last name before. Considering the context, I believe you have to apologize to your boyfriend. Can we check in before 12 am? You can find ATMs easily everywhere near this place. |
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담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2024-05-03 |
첨삭 내용 | I will send you a fax with further details. --*Correct sentence~ ^^
Better say: It may be preferable to live in lodging for a while before committing to a main property in another country.
Better say: Consider it a test in which you must choose the correct words.
Better say: You should provide me with a password so that I can connect to your Wi-Fi.
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