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| 제목 | my night routine | 등록일 | 2024-05-13 |
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| 내용 | I usually work overtime two times in a week.I eat salad for dinner if i have to overtime work and arrive at home about 10 p.m. I go to home by car with my friend as co-worker and neighbor. I do the exercise about 2 times in a week.I walk on a treadmill, use the fitness equipments that strength my upper, lower body or core-exercise with my body. I can’t run or hard-exercise because i have some health problem about my waist.If i don’t doing work overtime on weekdays, I off the work at 6, read books and study English, Japanese while I’m taking the bus for a one hour. I really love this time | ||
| 담당강사 | Jada2usa | 등록일 | 2024-05-13 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I work overtime two times a week. I eat salad for dinner if I have to work overtime and get home around 10 p.m. I carpool to and from work with my friend who is also my neighbor. I exercise about 2 times a week. I walk on a treadmill, use the fitness equipments that strengthen my upper, and lower body, or do core exercises. I can’t run or do intense workouts because I have some health problems. If I don’t work overtime, I get off work at 6. In my free time, I like to read books and study English and Japanese while I’m riding the bus for a one hour. I love this time! |
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