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제목 Making sentences~ 등록일 2024-05-16
내용 She's gone to arrange dinner party for her in-laws.
It would work if there weren't any problems in this code.
We guarantee quick exchange and refund.
Our company's facilities is the best all over the world.
Let's grab a beer after work out.
I ocationally have office lunch with other companies' employees.
Just be satisfied that given an hour to you. I only have twenty minutes left.
I guess the president organizes a new department.
All of the conference rooms were booked.
One minute and counting! Hurry up!
Are there any objections or does everyone agree it?
I never please my boss standard.
담당강사 Lynda 등록일 2024-05-22
첨삭 내용

She's gone to arrange dinner party for her in-laws. --*Correct sentence~ ^^ 


It would work if there weren't any problems in this code.  --*Correct sentence~ ^^ 


We guarantee quick exchange and refund. 

Better say: We guarantee a quick exchange and refund.

Our company's facilities is the best all over the world.

Better say: Our company has the best facilities in the world. 


Let's grab a beer after work out. 

Better say: Let's grab a beer after the work out. 


I ocationally have office lunch with other companies' employees.

Better say: I occasionally have office lunches with employees from different companies.


Just be satisfied that given an hour to you. I only have twenty minutes left.

Better say: Simply be satisfied with the hour that has been provided to you. I only have 20 minutes left.


I guess the president organizes a new department.--*Correct sentence~ ^^ 


All of the conference rooms were booked. --*Correct sentence~ ^^ 


One minute and counting! Hurry up! --*Correct sentence~ ^^ 


Are there any objections or does everyone agree it?

Better say: Are there any objections, or does everyone agree?


I never please my boss standard.

Better say: I never meet my boss's standards.

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