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| 제목 | Making sentences~ | 등록일 | 2024-05-16 | 
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| 내용 | She's gone to arrange dinner party for her in-laws. It would work if there weren't any problems in this code. We guarantee quick exchange and refund. Our company's facilities is the best all over the world. Let's grab a beer after work out. I ocationally have office lunch with other companies' employees. Just be satisfied that given an hour to you. I only have twenty minutes left. I guess the president organizes a new department. All of the conference rooms were booked. One minute and counting! Hurry up! Are there any objections or does everyone agree it? I never please my boss standard. | ||
| 담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2024-05-22 | 
| 첨삭 내용 | She's gone to arrange dinner party for her in-laws. --*Correct sentence~ ^^ 
 
 Better say: We guarantee a quick exchange and refund. Our company's facilities is the best all over the world. Better say: Our company has the best facilities in the world. 
 Better say: Let's grab a beer after the work out. 
 Better say: I occasionally have office lunches with employees from different companies. 
 Better say: Simply be satisfied with the hour that has been provided to you. I only have 20 minutes left. 
 
 
 
 Better say: Are there any objections, or does everyone agree? 
 Better say: I never meet my boss's standards. | ||