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제목 my job1 등록일 2024-05-16
내용 I’m a civil servant for Busan, am tasked with tax process for our staff.I has been about 1 year started this job.The drawbacks of my company are a little bit closed mood, periodically changing the task that makes me feel pressure.Also My task is complicated and difficult. Because nobody in our company knows about my task.So I have to call the tax office, need to check the law of tax and search on the internet. The worst of drawback is the pay of new employee that is too low than the other companys. However a advantage is freedom that I can enjoy various policys of welfare made by government.
담당강사 Jada2usa 등록일 2024-05-17
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I'm a civil servant in Busan. I've been working for my company for about a year now. My main responsibility is to assist our staff with their tax process. It's quite challenging because nobody else in our company knows how to do my job, so if I have a problem, I have to call the tax office, check the law of tax and do some research on the internet and I feel very overwhelmed when there is a sudden change with my tasks. The worst drawback is that the salary of new employees is lower than the other companys. However, one of the perks of this job is that I can take advantage of the various welfare policies made by the government.

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