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제목 0517 minimum wages 등록일 2024-05-17
내용 regarding to the minimum wages,
there are  pros and cons,
opposers are those who have concerns about the rise  in the prices , unemployments and unemployment and the supporters are those who think raising the minimum wage could be the solution to reduce the poverty and provide the boost to the economy.
담당강사 Jace2usa 등록일 2024-05-17
첨삭 내용 regarding to the minimum wages,
there are  pros and cons,
opposers are those who have concerns about the rise  in the prices , unemployments and unemployment and the supporters are those who think raising the minimum wage could be the solution to reduce the poverty and provide the boost to the economy. Hi! The sentence has a few issues: 1. "regarding to the minimum wages" should be "regarding the minimum wage" (remove the "to"). 2. The comma after "pros and cons" is unnecessary. 3. The phrase "opposers are those who have concerns about the rise in the prices, unemployments and unemployment" has an error: - "unemployments" should be "unemployment" (singular) 4. The phrase "the supporters are those who think raising the minimum wage could be the solution to reduce the poverty and provide the boost to the economy" is a bit wordy. It could be more concisely written as: "supporters believe raising the minimum wage could reduce poverty and boost the economy." Here is the corrected sentence: Regarding the minimum wage, there are pros and cons. Opposers have concerns about rising prices and unemployment, while supporters believe raising the minimum wage could reduce poverty and boost the economy.

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