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| 제목 | Oh god, I have many stories that wanted to talk to you! | 등록일 | 2024-05-24 |
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| 내용 | Second day, there was a big issue. We had a lunch late, so we just thought eating dinner simply. My friend bought a piece of cake that made in famous brand, 'HARBS', and we went to the convenience store for the next step. I bought noodles, both my friend and I bought a smoothie each. And then we came out from there, my friend's cake disappeared. kkk~ We're not sure, someone stole her cake! I thought a clerk was joking at first, but it was real. I guess someone knew it was good and stole it. She was so sad, but she overcame as eating a cake next day. kkkkk! | ||
| 담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2024-05-28 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Oh my~ Maybe that person thought it's for free and looks yummy~ kkk~ |
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