Ballet was originated from Italian Renaissance but it has been developed in the France by France  Queen who became from Italian novel woman. Eventhough it has the risk of eating disorder and stress but its discipline, teamwork, respect, hard works of the ballet still give the appeal to young dancers who want to take the ballet classes.
Ballet is still prominent form of dance to captivate people all over the world.

The sentence has several grammatical and stylistic issues. Here's an explanation of the problems and a revised version:

### Issues: 1. **Incorrect verb usage**: "Ballet was originated" should be "Ballet originated".

2. **Preposition usage**: "in the France" should be "in France", and "by France Queen" should be "by a French Queen".

3. **Redundancy and awkward phrasing**: "who became from Italian novel woman" is unclear and awkward. It could be simplified to "an Italian noblewoman".

4. **Compound sentence structure**: The sentence "Eventhough it has the risk of eating disorder and stress but its discipline, teamwork, respect, hard works of the ballet still give the appeal to young dancers who want to take the ballet classes." has several issues: -

"Eventhough" should be "Even though". - The conjunction "but" is redundant after "Even though". - "hard works" should be "hard work". - "the ballet" is not necessary. - "the ballet classes" should just be "ballet classes".

5. **Article usage**: "still prominent form" should be "a still prominent form". ### Revised Version:

Ballet originated from the Italian Renaissance but was developed in France by a French queen who was an Italian noblewoman. Even though it carries the risk of eating disorders and stress, its discipline, teamwork, respect, and hard work still appeal to young dancers who want to take ballet classes. Ballet remains a prominent form of dance that captivates people all over the world.

Explanation: 1. **Correct verb and preposition usage**: "Ballet originated" (correct verb form) and "in France" (correct preposition).

2. **Clarity and conciseness**: Simplifying the description of the queen and removing unnecessary words.

3. **Improved sentence structure**: Fixing the compound sentence structure and eliminating redundancy.

4. **Proper article usage**: Ensuring the use of articles is appropriate for the context.