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제목 Hi Nick. I want to check if my English sentences is correct. (6/7) 등록일 2024-06-07
내용 1. My team has brainstorming meetings quite often. My team manage a community application. So we are thinking about ways to help customers communicatie better within the app. We spend two hours every week to analyze other similar services and we update our service.
2. I thought it was difficult for customers to write reviews because they are worried about what to write. So, I suggest that let’s give some example and easy topics so they can post a review more easily. After that, customers began posting reviews more and more easily.
Thanks:)
담당강사 NicholasG1usa 등록일 2024-06-10
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1. My team has brainstorming meetings quite often. My team manages a community application. So we are always thinking about ways to help customers communicate better within the app. We spend about two hours analyzing and updating our current and similar services each week.
2. I thought it was difficult for customers to write reviews because they were worried about what to write. So, I suggested that we provide them with some examples, pre-written messages, and easy topics so they can post a review more easily. After that, more and more customers began posting reviews with ease.
 Here you are, Amy. I just saw this composition correction this morning so I am sorry if it took a while to get it back to you. I hope you find it most helpful. Best regards, Nick. 

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