It’s too hot thesedays in Korea. We have four seasons and it’s summer now. Spring is warm. Summer is hot. Autumn is cool. Winter is cold.
I bore the hotness the day before but I started to operate the air conditioner yesterday. After getting up I had a cough. Maybe the reason is operating the air-con. It’ dilemma.

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It's too hot these days in Korea. We have four seasons, and it's summer now. Spring is warm, summer is hot, autumn is cool, and winter is cold. I endured the heat the day before, but I started using the air conditioner yesterday. After getting up, I had a cough. Maybe the reason is using the air conditioner. It's a dilemma.

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Your paragraph effectively describes the current weather in Korea and the challenges you face with the summer heat. You clearly convey the progression of the seasons and how they feel, making it easy for the reader to understand your experience. The personal touch about your struggle with the air conditioner and the resulting cough adds a relatable element. Overall, you did a great job sharing your situation in a straightforward and engaging manner.--- Teacher Kimberly