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제목 Hi Venus 등록일 2024-08-02
내용 It was very nice to meet Venus.
As I said, I have been attending this class since 8 months ago.
sorry, it's been exactly seven months ago. This is the eighth month.
Last year, I thought that I had more spare time as I get older.
So I looked what I wanted to do in this spare time.
This is why I started this class.
I want to get a level of speaking that can easily talk to foreigners in daily life.
But my English is so poor. I hope you can lead me. Thank you.
담당강사 Venus1usa 등록일 2024-08-07
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It was very nice to meet Venus.

As I said, I have been attending this class for eight months.

Sorry, it's been exactly seven months. This is the eighth month.

Last year, I thought that I would have more spare time as I got older. So, I looked into what I wanted to do in this spare time.

This is why I started this class. I want to reach a level of speaking where I can easily talk to foreigners in daily life.

But my English is still poor. I hope you can guide me. Thank you.

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