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| 제목 | This is the essay about my trip to Japan! | 등록일 | 2024-08-02 |
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| 내용 | I went to Japan for 3 nights last week. The destination was Osaka, and it was my third trip to Japan. This time, I traveled with my old friends. Excepting me, they were first time to go Japan. I was worry because I couldn't speak Japanese, and I had no sense to find route. Eventually, everyone was okay, and it was a good trip except weather. It was too hot, and I felt like I was in the water. It was not raining, but it was moist. We were exhausted right after left our hotel. Korea was also hot, but I felt Japan was hotter than Korea was. Have you gone to Korea or Japan before? | ||
| 담당강사 | Jin1 | 등록일 | 2024-08-05 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I went to Japan for 3 nights last week. The destination was Osaka, and it was my third trip to Japan. This time, I traveled with my old friends. Except for me, it was their first time to go to Japan. I was worried because I cannot speak Japanese, and I have a terrible sense of direction. Eventually, everyone enjoyed, and it was a good trip except for weather. It was too hot, and I felt like I was in the water. It was not raining, but it was humid. We were exhausted right after we left our hotel. It was also hot in Korea, but I felt Japan's weather was hotter than Korea's. Have you gone to Korea or Japan before? |
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