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제목 | This is the main story about trip to Japan~! | 등록일 | 2024-08-02 |
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내용 | First day, I went to Ghibli Park. Actually, I saw only 3 movies by Ghibli. But I love 'The cat returns', so it was deserved that I went to. It was huge, but we could see all areas. Because we didn't get in line to take a picture with characters. We just took pictures we were passing by. Next day, 3 people went to Aquarium and me and another just looked around Osaka. We gathered again, we went to the umeda sky building. It's observatory. We were all tired, but we didn't give up to see a night view. It was beautiful, but it was challenging because there were a lot of people.. | ||
담당강사 | Jin1 | 등록일 | 2024-08-05 |
첨삭 내용 | On my first day in Japan, I went to Ghibli Park. Actually, I saw only three movies by Ghibli. But I love 'The cat returns', so I am so happy that I went there. It was huge, but we were able to see the whole place. We didn't get in line to take photos with the characters. We just took pictures of them while we were passing by. The next day, three of my friends and I went to the aquarium while one of our friends just looked around Osaka. After that, we gathered again and went to the Umeda Sky Building. It's an observatory. We were all tired at that time, but we didn't give up to see a night view. It was beautiful, but it was challenging because there were a lot of people. |