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| 제목 | How can I say shortly about the games playing with balls. | 등록일 | 2024-08-06 |
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| 내용 | I searched about the status of korea teams for the games playing with balls in the Paris olympic. They all didn't win in the resional pre-matches except only woman handball team. I can understand now why the number of athletes of Korea was so less than before at the opening ceremony of paris olympic. |
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| 담당강사 | Venus1usa | 등록일 | 2024-08-07 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I looked up the status of Korean teams in ball games for the Paris Olympics. None of them won in the regional pre-matches except for the women's handball team. Now I understand why the number of Korean athletes was much smaller than before at the opening ceremony of the Paris Olympics. |
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