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제목	Kanye West in Korea	등록일	2024-09-02
내용	I made mistake again. Kanye West is my best favorite musician. Actually I didn't know this fact until few weeks ago. Kanye West visit Korea almost 13 years ago. He visit with Lupe Fiasco. Both of them my favorite MC. But in that period I met my wife and I didn't have a job. I though if I went to the concert, my girl friend could split with me. So I didn't go their and have regretted for 13 years. Few weeks ago, Kanye Visited Korea again. He held listening party. It means artists just perform without singing. I didn't go because I think it's ridiculous. But after party, He sang 77 songs.
담당강사	Stewart1usa	등록일	2024-09-25
첨삭 내용	I made another mistake. Kanye West is my favorite musician. Actually, I didn't know this until few weeks ago. Kanye West visited Korea almost 13 years ago. He was with Lupe Fiasco. Both of them are my favorite MCs. But at that time, I met my wife and I didn't have a job. I thought if I went to the concert, my girlfriend might break-up with me. So I didn't go there and have regretted it for 13 years. A few weeks ago, Kanye visited Korea again. He held a listening party for [his new music]. I didn't go because I thought it would be ridiculous. But after the party, he sang 77 songs.