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제목 what is happiness 3 등록일 2024-09-05
내용 go to new places, and try new sports. I will actively try to enrich my life. One of them is the moment when I meet James and have a conversation in English like this. This is a new stimulus and a special moment for me. I am not good at English, but I am happy to communicate with you.
담당강사 JamesH2usa 등록일 2024-09-30
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So I thought TO MYSLEF, "I will make my day more special. I think I will learn new things, go to new placES, and try new sports."

 

I will actively try to enrich my life.   GOOD

One (of them) EXAMPLE OF ENRICHMENT is the moment when I met James and STARTED havING conversationS in English like this.

This is a new stimulus and a special moment for me.  GOOD

I am not good at English, but I am happy to communicate with you (AND CONTINUE THE PURSUIT OF MAKING GOOD MEMORIES AS THEY RELATE TO LEARNING ENGLISH AND MY OVERALL HAPPINESS WITH MY LIFE). GOOD

 

 

 

Thank you, thank you, thank you....I will analyze these, three of them, over the weekend and we will discuss these answers next week.  Have a good weekend Hyeonjin.

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