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제목 I made sentences and I saw your reply! 등록일 2024-09-27
내용 He, Jin! How are you? I read your reply about a semicolon. Your explain was so clear. I understood 100%. Thanks to your perfect explain!

Our team goal is in line with the company's vision.
Can you give me just a sec? I need some time to think.
It could be better using brief sentences.
Is she currently working in the library?
He always puts me through all calls of work.
You will have a need my help.
I determined to learn engineering.
The low-income benefit from government.
I think everyone knows my phone number. I got a lot of cold calls yesterday.
His cold call will generate more sales.
담당강사 Jin1 등록일 2024-09-30
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Hello, Jin! How are you? I read your reply about the semicolon. Your explanation was so clear. I understood it 100%. Thanks to your perfect explanation!

Our team goal is in line with the company's vision.
Can you give me just a sec? I need some time to think.
It would be better to use shorter sentences.
Is she currently working at the library?
He always puts me through all of the tasks at work.
You will need my help.
I determined to learn engineering.
It is the result of the low-income benefit from government.
I think everyone knows my phone number. I got a lot of cold calls yesterday.
His cold call will generate more sales.

 

Hi, Jin! Happy Monday! :) You did a good job making sentences here. Keep it up! Let's talk tomorrow. Have a great day! 
~Teacher Jin

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