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제목 Thank you for praying for a good luck, Jin! 등록일 2024-10-12
내용 I'm sorry replying to you just after reading your reply. Thanks for your cheer! I'm busy these days preparing working holiday.. And I'm meeting people around me before I go to Canada. Since we may not meet for a long time. I went fishing with my dad this Saturday. It was so tired, but it was so excited at the same time~! Now there only left 1 week. However, there are still a lot of places where I have to go. All kind of hospital and banks. I realized living alone is hard ^-ㅠ But I'll make it! I can do all of these! Please give me a courage.
담당강사 Jin1 등록일 2024-10-14
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I'm sorry for replying late. I just read your reply to my last message. Thanks for cheering me! I'm busy these days preparing for the working holiday. Also, I'm meeting the people around me before I go to Canada, as we may not see each other for a long time. I went fishing with my dad this Saturday. It was exhausting, but I felt so excited at the same time! Now, there is only one week left before I go. However, there are still a lot of places I have to visit. I have to go to all kinds of hospitals and banks. I realized living alone is hard. But I'll make it! I can do all of these! Please give me courage.

 

Hello, Jin! It is true that it is hard to live alone. That's according to my experience. However, I learned a lot during those times, and I believe that you'll learn a lot too. I know that you'll be able to do whatever you are aiming to do in Canada. You're a great person with great dreams, and I am sure that you'll be able to make those dreams come true. I will always support you! Fighting!
~Jin

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