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제목 i'm going to my company 등록일 2024-10-28
내용 i'm going to my company during write on here.
i've worked at company make credit card for a year.
i've checked all card make corretely which is very boring to me.
i remember when i was tested my english level for this program, they asked me "how do you think about your job?" so i answerd same.
now i'm in so crowd subway. i think seoul that i've lived has crazy population than other city.
i‘m always exhaustion even i don't start my work.
ahaaaa they're pushing me. i'm struggling to defens my zone. i give up. goodbye!!
담당강사 JeffGr2usa 등록일 2024-10-28
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I'm going to my company while writing here.
I've worked at a company that makes credit cards for a year.
I've checked all cards made correctly which is very boring to me.
I remember when I was tested my English level for this program, they asked me "How do you think about your job?" so I answered the same.
now I'm in a crowded subway. I think Seoul where I've lived has a crazier population than other cities.
I‘m always exhausted even when I don't start my work.
ahaaaa they're pushing me. I'm struggling to defend my zone. I give up. goodbye!!

 

I totally understand you traveling work isn't easy and it gets frustrating just hang in there 

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