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| 제목 | YouTube Celebrities | 등록일 | 2024-11-08 |
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| 내용 | I agree that YouTubers are celebrities because they are very popular and sometimes they have millions of fans worldwide, that local celebrities can not have in their nations, and many have already used YouTube as a springboard for large fame . so I think we already live in a totally different era from formal and traditional formats and someone who take the success and fames, might require harder works and more dedication to gain an audience than the ways in existing broadcasting platforms | ||
| 담당강사 | Brandiss2usa | 등록일 | 2024-11-08 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I agree that YouTubers are celebrities because they are very popular. I think we already live in a totally different era. Someone who wants to be successful and famous might require hard work and more dedication to gain an audience than the existing ways of broadcasting platforms. |
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