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제목 | childfree | 등록일 | 2024-11-22 |
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내용 | I disagree with people choosing a childfree life, because it is not normal and family is more important than my single life. When I got married, I did not realized that my children are such a important motivation for me and my wife to go forward and handle whatever difficulties we meet in our life, and I could not define my marriage without my children. So I think marriage and children means normal family and happiness |
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담당강사 | Brandiss2usa | 등록일 | 2024-11-22 |
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Very good job! Teacher Brandiss I disagree with people choosing a childfree life, because it is not normal and family is more important than my single life. |