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제목 childfree 등록일 2024-11-22
내용 I disagree with people choosing a childfree life, because it is not normal and family is more important than my single life.

When I got married, I did not realized that my children are such a important motivation for me and my wife to go forward and handle whatever difficulties we meet in our life, and I could not define my marriage without my children.
So I think marriage and children means normal family and happiness
담당강사 Brandiss2usa 등록일 2024-11-22
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Very good job! Teacher Brandiss

I disagree with people choosing a childfree life, because it is not normal and family is more important than my single life.

When I got married, I did not realized that my children are such a important motivation for me and my wife to go forward and handle whatever difficulties we meet in our life, and I could not define my marriage without my children.
So I think marriage and children means normal family and happiness

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