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| 제목 | pay to win games | 등록일 | 2024-11-26 |
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| 내용 | I agree that Pay-to-win games are harmless because people should be responsible for their own purchases and as they paid, they might focus on the games for fun and despite of those investment, it’s just a game for them, not any more. I heard that some one who are seriously mad on bets and results, might loose their minds , but it is not the common but they might be recovered with sort of the warning from the gaming companies. |
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| 담당강사 | Brandiss2usa | 등록일 | 2024-11-26 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I agree that Pay-to-win games are harmless because people should be responsible for their own purchases and as they paid, they might focus on the games for fun. Despite the investment, it’s just a game for them, not any more. |
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