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제목 The last day of November~ 등록일 2024-11-30
내용 Hi, Jin! The last day of November! Are you having a good weekend? Korea is cold and snowy. It's a good justification for staying at home!
Anyway, I'm reading articles in my new book in advance, it was hard for reading, but now the contents were interesting. I like subjects that make people argue. Few years ago, I talked about animals rights with my friends. My opinion was 'All animals have to live in natural habitats.' One of my friends told me 'Haven't you ever thought your pay for zoo can help animals?' I couldn't think like that. These articles make me think another thoughts. So it's fun.
담당강사 Jin1 등록일 2024-12-02
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Hi, Jin! It is the last day of November! Are you having a good weekend? Korea is cold and snowy today. It's a very good reason for staying at home!
Anyway, I'm reading articles in my new book in advance. They are hard to read, but now the contents are getting interesting. I like subjects that make people argue. A few years ago, I talked about animals rights with my friends. My opinion was, "All animals have to live in natural habitats." One of my friends told me, "Haven't you ever thought your payment for zoo can help animals?" I couldn't think like that. These articles make me think differently. So it's fun.

 

Hi, Jin! Happy Monday! I had a great weekend, and I hope you a wonderful one, too. It is nice to know that you're enjoying reading the articles now. I am looking forword to our discussion tomorrow. Have a great day!

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