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제목 | This is the last essay of this week. | 등록일 | 2024-11-30 |
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내용 | Add recipient leads to subsidy extension. Even if you raise livestock as a product, you have to raise them in a good environment. Herbicide is good chemical for human, in other hand it hurts to all animals. I saw a farmer grazed her horses in the field. It looks like he almost accommodated with his new class. This product can make high loss, if not it can yield a good return. She identified her parents was in home as soon as she got home. We're seeking an efficient person work for us. It's too hard now to find fertile farmlands that not be used. Baby ducks eat weed and they help farming. |
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담당강사 | Jin1 | 등록일 | 2024-12-02 |
첨삭 내용 | Adding recipient leads to an extension of the subsidy. |