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제목 plastic straw 등록일 2024-12-03
내용 I agree with the plastic straw ban because they damage the ecosystem seriously and even to me and my family.
If we saw the case of the turtle with the straw inside its nose, we could imagine how micro plastic endanger our lives and suffer from strange illness.

And we need to save wildlife and ourself,
so we need to act as much as we can, starting with the small activities like removing plastic straws and plastic cups and bags
담당강사 Brandiss2usa 등록일 2024-12-03
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I agree with the plastic straw ban because they damage the ecosystem seriously and even to me and my family.
If we saw the case of the turtle with the straw inside its nose, we could imagine how micro plastic endangers our lives and suffer from strange illnesses.
 

We need to save wildlife and ourselves. We need to act as much as we can starting with the small activities like removing plastic straws and plastic cups and bags.

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