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제목 | socialism | 등록일 | 2024-12-11 |
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내용 | I disagree with socialism because it has a poor historical track record in many countries. Even a few cases that seem successful often lack clear evidence of sustainable results, and people are discouraged from questioning them. So far, free-market democracies have been the only system to consistently achieve historical economic success, with a proven track record to back it up. One key reason for this is the reward system inherent in free-market economies, which directly incentivizes hard work. In contrast, socialism tends to delay or diminish rewards for individual effort. |
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담당강사 | Brandiss2usa | 등록일 | 2024-12-12 |
첨삭 내용 | I disagree with socialism because it has a poor historical track record in many countries. Even a few cases that seem successful often lack clear evidence of sustainable results, and people are discouraged from questioning them. |