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제목 | This is second essay! | 등록일 | 2024-12-21 |
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내용 | Koera is too cold.. I need warm weather! Anyway, have a happy day~ They approximately succeed the goal, but the time was shortage. This job requires immediacy and accuracy. The firm decided to incorporate the affiliated companies. We have to repurpose our new product for next season. These entities have meat as a staple. Our team leader has remarkable perception. Most of people feel nostalgia when they came across something have their youth. All students need to peruse the main school rules before entering. This brand had had only online stores, but now they built a brick and mortar stores. |
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담당강사 | Jin1 | 등록일 | 2024-12-23 |
첨삭 내용 | Korea is too cold. I need warm weather! Anyway, Have a happy day!
Hi, Jin! You did an amazing job here! Keep up the good work! |