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제목 Missed winter vacation 등록일 2025-01-07
내용 My kids started their winter vacation.
The vacation is needed to take a rest, experience something that they want to do,
read some books, study the subjects.
When I was young... I planed many things that I like to do for spending my cool vacation. For this vacation, I lose my weight, learn English vocabulary(5,000 or more), read 100 books and so on. But it was just perfect paper plans. !!! HaHa..
If I came back the time again, I’d love to play cheerfully.

To teacher
You’re fixing my missentences and replacing the right sense of vocabularies. Thank you for your teaching.
담당강사 NatashaM1usa 등록일 2025-01-08
첨삭 내용

My kids started their winter vacation.
They can rest, experience new things, read books, study, and do what they want.
When I was young, I used to plan the activities that I wanted to do during the winter vacation. This winter, I plan to lose weight, learn English vocabulary (5,000 words or more), read 100 books, and so on. My plans are perfect on paper, but I'm not sure if I can achieve them.

 

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