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제목 Travel to Taichung in Taiwan 등록일 2025-01-10
내용 I picked Taichung as a last vacation destination in 2024.
Taichung was a place i visited 5 years ago.
So I didn't need to make a detailed plan. I decided what to do next day before going to bed.
Last travel I only did a city tour, but this time I visited where I could enjoy Taiwan nature.
There was the largest lake in Taiwan about 1 hour half away from the city It was so big that I couldn't walk around it, I had to ride a bike or cruise to go around it.
And I visited a night market on the last night in 2024 to enjoy Taiwan foods. There were so many people and the streets were so crowded.
담당강사 FionaA2usa 등록일 2025-01-10
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I picked Taichung as a last vacation destination in 2024.
Taichung was a place i visited 5 years ago.
So I didn't need to make a detailed plan. I decided what to do next day before going to bed.
Last travel I only did a city tour, but this time I visited where I could enjoy Taiwan nature.
There was the largest lake in Taiwan about 1 hour half away from the city It was so big that I couldn't walk around it, I had to ride a bike or cruise to go around it.
And I visited a night market on the last night in 2024  to enjoy Taiwan foods. There were so many people and the streets were so crowded.

 

 

Hey Thank you for the effort, I would like you to go over the same topic with the points we discussed in class,

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