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| 제목 | Do you know Hwisung who is famous singer in Korea? | 등록일 | 2025-03-12 |
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| 내용 | He was passed away yesterday I heared. By article, He commited suiside...and syringes was spread by him. Some years ago, He was convicted of taking propofols, but thesedays he was preparing for the concert at 25.3.15. He is the same age as me, and he debuted as a singer when I was going to University. I like his song such as "안되나요" and he reminds me in my youth. So His death was make me very sad... |
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| 담당강사 | Heni1 | 등록일 | 2025-03-12 |
| 첨삭 내용 | He (was) passed away yesterday I hearD |
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