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제목 Please feedback for lesson 2 등록일 2025-06-26
내용 Good evening!
Thank you so much for attending here.even though the weather is getting hot.

Let's get the presentation underway as LCL export consol team maneger, I'm very pleased to have the chance to introduce about our EUNSAN company.
Let me tell you about myself!
I'm erica and I'm charge of arranging LCL export document. Usually issue BL, invoice and help the shipper for issuing custom clearance insurance and arraging trucking from the shipper's warehouse to our warehouse. And also provide all of the documents to our various local partner and care the cargo can deliver to destination ver
담당강사 Lauryn2usa 등록일 2025-06-26
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Hi Lee Sihyeon, I have highlighted the changes in red. It seems as if you were only able to submit part of the presentation 

 

Good evening!
Thank you so much for attending here. Even though the weather is getting hot.

Let's get the presentation underway as LCL export consol team manager, I'm very pleased to have the chance to introduce about our EUNSAN company.
Let me tell you about myself!
I'm Erica, and I'm in charge of arranging the LCL export document. Usually issue BL, invoice, and help the shipper for with issuing custom clearance insurance and arranging trucking from the shipper's warehouse to our warehouse. And also provide all of the documents to our various local partners and care ensure that the cargo can be delivered to the destination ver

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