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제목 English Interview Practice #2 등록일 2025-09-03
내용 I am studying for an English interview!

1. Could you tell me about yourself?

→Hello, my name is Hyunha Song.
I’m an active and outgoing person who enjoys working with people.
My first job was as a ground staff member at Incheon Airport, where I learned responsibility and calmness.
While working there, I realized that I felt motivated when providing good service to people.
This experience inspired me to pursue a career as a cabin crew member, and that is why I am here today.

Thanks a lot Yoann teacher ♥
담당강사 Yoann 등록일 2025-09-03
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I am studying for an English interview!
I am studying for an English interview!

1. Could you tell me about yourself?
1. Could you tell me about yourself?

→Hello, my name is Hyunha Song.
→Hello, my name is Hyunha Song.

I'm an active and outgoing person who enjoys working with people.
I'm an active, outgoing person who enjoys working with others.

My first job was as a ground staff member at Incheon Airport, where I learned responsibility and calmness.
My first job was as a ground staff member at Incheon Airport, where I developed a strong sense of responsibility and the ability to remain calm under pressure.

While working there, I realized that I felt motivated when providing good service to people.
While working there, I discovered that I’m most motivated when delivering excellent service and making a positive impact on others.

This experience inspired me to pursue a career as a cabin crew member, and that is why I am here today.
That experience sparked my passion for becoming a cabin crew member, which ultimately led me to where I am today.


Thanks a lot, Yoann teacher ♥
Thanks a lot, Teacher Yoann ♥

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