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제목 | English Interview Practice #3 | 등록일 | 2025-09-09 |
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내용 | ✔️ My hobby is traveling with my family every year. Through these trips, I can experience different cultures and meet new people. They have helped me become more open-minded and motivated. ✔️ I liked Sydney, Australia the most. The city has beautiful scenery, and it was also my first trip with my mother, so it remains a very special memory for me. She enjoyed it so much that she even said she wanted to come back again, since she really loves nature. I hope to visit Sydney once more in the future as a cabin crew member. Thank you for helping me improve my English writing.♡ |
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담당강사 | Yoann | 등록일 | 2025-09-09 |
첨삭 내용 | ✔️ My hobby is traveling with my family every year. Through these trips, I can experience different cultures and meet new people. They have helped me become more open-minded and motivated. ✔️ I liked Sydney, Australia the most. The city has beautiful scenery, and it was also my first trip with my mother, so it remains a very special memory for me. She enjoyed it so much that she even said she wanted to come back again, since she really loves nature. I hope to visit Sydney once more in the future as a cabin crew member. Thank you for helping me improve my English writing.♡ |