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제목 English Interview Practice #3 등록일 2025-09-09
내용 ✔️ My hobby is traveling with my family every year.
Through these trips, I can experience different cultures and meet new people.
They have helped me become more open-minded and motivated.
✔️ I liked Sydney, Australia the most. The city has beautiful scenery, and it was also my first trip with my mother, so it remains a very special memory for me. She enjoyed it so much that she even said she wanted to come back again, since she really loves nature. I hope to visit Sydney once more in the future as a cabin crew member.

Thank you for helping me improve my English writing.♡
담당강사 Yoann 등록일 2025-09-09
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✔️ My hobby is traveling with my family every year.
✔️ My hobby is traveling with my family every year.

Through these trips, I can experience different cultures and meet new people.
Through these trips, I can experience different cultures and meet new people.

They have helped me become more open-minded and motivated.
They have helped me become more open-minded and motivated.

✔️ I liked Sydney, Australia the most. 
✔️ I liked Sydney, Australia the most. 

The city has beautiful scenery, and it was also my first trip with my mother, so it remains a very special memory for me. 
The city had beautiful scenery, and since it was my first trip with my mother, it remains a very special memory for me.

She enjoyed it so much that she even said she wanted to come back again, since she really loves nature. 
She enjoyed it so much that she said she wanted to return, since she truly loves nature.

I hope to visit Sydney once more in the future as a cabin crew member.
I hope to visit Sydney again in the future as a cabin crew member.

Thank you for helping me improve my English writing.♡
Thank you for helping me improve my English writing.

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