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| 제목 | Set a plan | 등록일 | 2025-10-17 |
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| 내용 | As the winter is coming, I feel duty to progress my ability. Then I make some plan for new year. I usually use website NOTION that is so comfortable to set a plan, write the diary. When A new year start, i feel pound to achieve new plan. Actually i can’t achieve all of the plan, remember the plan at last of year. My plan was similar to the last thing. But coming this year’s plan will be newer than last because these days, I consider pregnancy. The will of pregnancy makes me to spend my time productively. | ||
| 담당강사 | Nas1usa | 등록일 | 2025-10-20 |
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Vocabulary:
Prepositions X – I feel duty to progress my ability. X – I usually use website NOTION that is so comfortable to set a plan, write the diary. X – I feel pound to achieve new plan.
Hi Dasol, Your reflection beautifully captures your forward-thinking mindset as the year draws to a close. The way you connect seasonal change with self-improvement is truly poetic and admirable. I especially appreciate your use of Notion it’s an excellent platform for structured planning and creative journaling. You’ve expressed strong self-awareness and a heartfelt desire for growth, which is inspiring. Remember, goals don’t have to be achieved all at once; even small progress is still movement forward. Keep channeling your energy into productivity and personal development it’s the steady rhythm of consistency that turns dreams into reality. It’s so beautiful to hear that you’re planning to start your journey toward pregnancy. That’s such a precious and meaningful goal, one that reflects love, hope, and a new beginning. I sincerely wish you the best of health, strength, and serenity as you prepare both your body and mind for this next chapter. May each day bring you calm, balance, and joy as you take gentle steps toward your dream. Your determination and positivity will surely guide you toward a happy and healthy experience Take care Have a great day today I look forward to our next class Teacher Nas |
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