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| 제목 | Christmas | 등록일 | 2025-12-05 |
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| 내용 | when I go to my brother's house I take a bus for two hour. but I will go to there this Christmas. I am going to meet my mom and my niece. I have two nieces. They are cute. but they grow so fast. the youngest is going to go elementary school. I worry about what will I buy Christmas gift to give my nieces. | ||
| 담당강사 | Laine | 등록일 | 2025-12-05 |
| 첨삭 내용 | When I go to my brother's house, I take a bus for two hours. And I will go to there this Christmas. I am going to meet my mom and my niece. I have two nieces. They are cute. But they grow so fast. The youngest is going to go to elementary school. I'm wondering what Christmas gifts will I buy for my nieces. |
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